(Updated) J101. Edits. & today’s on-the-spot writing exercise: Sidebarring a story

UPDATEd: Venue is Mall of Asia. Free shuttle available in U.P., at Quezon Hall, to leave 12 noon, according to the UP CHK student council. Students also have the option of viewing the event on live TV at the college lobby.

J101. Edits. & today’s on-the-spot writing exercise: Sidebarring a story

Edits edits edits

      Most students got the basic structure of the straight news report and know how to storify stats and plays.            

         For the basic sportswriting exercise: many, of course, got what the story was, but for the straight news story style, there was a problem with….too much rooting for the home team (U.P), and a problem with wordiness, or propensity for editorialized/ descriptive clauses to favor the home team.

       Please remember that in this exercise, you are wearing your “reporter’s hat” and not your “U.P. student’s hat” .

        Here are some edits (more edits during the classroom discussion). Three of the most concise yet vivid news reports will be presented during the classroom discussion.

        Today’s on- the- spot writing exercise: Sidebarring a straight news report, follows at the end of this section on edits, please read through:

SOME EDITS (as part of the learning experience):

edits edits edits:

Maroons dunk Archers, snatch top spot

      Tumitindig, sumusulong! (edit: delete. Do not sloganeer)

        Yesterday went down in UAAP history as the UP Fighting Maroons slammed the DLSU Green Archers, 71-66, in the men’s basketball game in the Big Dome in a surprising winning streak that put them in the top spot. (edit: don’t lead with “Yesterday”; tighten the last 15 words to five words and just give us the result)

      Pulling ahead early on in the game, the Maroons had Jett Manuel sinking 14 points along with 5 rebounds and 5 assists, with Paul Desiderio contributing 13 points and 4 boards and Piero Longa with 10 points. (Ok).
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        The University of the Philippines Fighting Maroons extended their surprisingly unblemished UAAP 78 Men’s Basketball start, trashing the De La Salle Green Archers, 71-66 in the Smart Araneta Coliseum, September 9. (edit: too much rooting for the home team; tighten the first 15 words to 5-7 words and just tell us the result, like, (using your own verbs): UP trashed DLSU 71-66 yesterday extending their win to 2-0.)

     Jett Manuel, who scored 14 points, five rebounds and five assists, powered the Maroons in gaining the number one spot of the team standings, 2-0 after 10 years of drought. The enthralling match also featured UP’s revenge on La Salle since its last win in 2009. (Ok. Delete enthralling)
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       The onslaught has yet to stop for the UP Fighting Maroons. (edit: too much rooting for the home team. This lead is not informative. Give us the story right away).

       Ironically ending with a 3-point shot from DLSU, UP advances once again in the 78th season of UAAP Men’s Basketball Tournament after its second straight win surprising DLSU with a score of 71-66 last September 9, 2015 at Smart Araneta Coliseum. (don’t lead with “Ironically ending with a 3-point shot from DLSU” because it’s not the story)

UP was leading in all 4 quarters of the game much to the shock of DLSU. (“much to the shock”: too much editorializing)
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       The Fighting Maroons held off Jeron Teng and the Green Archers with their shooting prowess and tight defense. The team continued their surprising winning streak after 10 years in the UAAP Season 78, gaining a victory against De La Salle Green Archers for the first time since August 22, 2009. UP’s victory paved way to a 2-0 standing this Wednesday, September 9 at the Smart-Araneta Coliseum. (too wordy, too many descriptive clauses. Just lead with the story: the result of the game)

      DLSU had a strong start this season after defeating previous UAAP champion NU, but with UP’s great team performance, they fell down to a 1-1 record.
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        Against expectations, the University of the Philippines Fighting Maroons upset the De La Salle University Green Archers with a score of 71- 66 at the Smart Araneta Coliseum, yesterday September 9, 2015. The Maroons secured a win- loss record of 2-0 at the UAAP Season 78, a first for the team since 2009. (too editorialized)

The Archers were caught off- guard as the Maroons sealed the first half, 41- 28. Save for a brief moment in the second quarter, the Maroons maintained the lead throughout the game. The dominant players in the first half were Jett Manuel with 14 points, 5 rebounds, and 5 assists and Paul Desiderio with 13 points and 4 rebounds.
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71-66, UP triumphs over La Salle for a Back-to-Back Victory

       Started from the bottom, now we’re here! University of the Philippines Fighting Maroons remained on top as they defeated the De La Salle University Green Archers with a score of 71-66, on Wednesday, September 9, 2015 at the SMART-Araneta Coliseum. It has been a decade since UP had a two consecutive win in the Men’s Basketball Tournament of the University Athletic Association of the Philippines. (edit: “Started from the bottom, now we’re here!”. Do not lead with your feelings. Too much rooting for the home team, don’t rah-rah in your straight news report)

      Since the first quarter of the game, UP had the leading tally of 16-14. The gap widened by 13 points on the second quarter as UP’s score grew at 41 while DLSU was left behind with 28 points. (Ok)
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UP remains undefeated, slams DLSU at 71-66

       Loud cheers filled the Smart Araneta Coliseum as the UP Fighting Maroons Men’s Basketball Team bagged their second consecutive win this UAAP season, defeating the DLSU Green Archers with a score of 71-66 yesterday, September 9, 2015. (“Loud cheers filled the Smart Araneta Coliseum…” is not the story. Lead with the story.)

Their first win was against the UE Red Warriors last Saturday.(delete. Put this in the last paragraph)

UP led the game during the first three quarters, ending the third quarter with a difference of 12 points at 54-42.
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      UP on top of UAAP leaderboard, remains unbeaten after ambushing DLSU. (edit: we don’t normally use the verb “ambush” in sports stories.)

     The University of the Philippines (UP) has taken everyone by surprise as they claimed their second straight win in the 78th Season of the UAAP Men’s Basketball Tournament. (“has taken everyone by surprise”: tighten)

      Cheers exploded from the crowd as the Fighting Maroons finished the intense ball game against De La Salle University (DLSU), 71-66 yesterday at the Araneta Coliseum. (edit: “Cheers exploded from the crowd..” too much cheerleading in a news story)
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“UP tasted victory the second time around”

       After surviving the first fight of both teams, UP and DLSU had bumped into each other yesterday September 8, 2015 at the Smart Araneta Coliseum for a furious ball game where UP tasted its second win this season for men’s basketball division. (edit: “After surviving the first fight of both teams” is vague and unclear. “UP and DLSU had bumped into each other” is unidiomatic. “for a furious ball game where UP tasted its second win this season for men’s basketball division”: tighten)

       Continuing its surprising start, UP Fighting maroons had scored 71-66 beating down the DLSU Green Archers. The first three period ended in favor of UP, leaving a more than 10 points marker every set. (unidiomatic)

      But the Green Archers had a late outburst on the last period that set the game to a five point deficit of 64-59, still in favor of the Maroons. The last minute of the game was unbelievable because of the multiple free throws done by UP and the enduring effort of the Archers to catch up with the scoring. (Ok, except for “unbelievable”, “enduring effort” etc.)
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Three of the most concise yet vivid news reports from members of the class will be presented during the classroom discussion.

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       Moving on….

           NOTES ON TODAY’S ON-THE-SPOT WRITING EXERCISE: SIDEBARRING A STORY
           A straight news story, because of its limits in perspective and form, does not capture all of the possible relevant points of view – no story does. And so, sometimes the editor or news director assigns you to sidebar a story to present the human interest angle and provide a closer look at an aspect of the story that cannot be covered by a straight news report.
        Today’s exercise would be sidebarring a story – on the spot. Find a crucial sub-story that requires more exploration or explanation. This exercise will sensitize you to the human interest aspect of all news reports.
          Let’s start with sidebarring today’s news event that involves U.P.:
          U.P. Fighting Maroons vs. Ateneo Blue Eagles, today, 2pm, MALL OF ASIA ARENA (corrected). Students have the option of viewing the game either at the MALL OF ASIA ARENA (corrected) or thru live TV at the lobby of the college. I will be available to answer any questions in the classroom during class hours.
(suggested sidebars):
 ♣ a call by the referee that requires explanation or that could be contested

  ♣ behavior of any of the coaches, athletes, members of the audience that is (a) unsportsmanlike; (b)disruptive of the game; (c)hilarious

 ♣ scuffles on-court or off-court
  ♣bad falls, injuries of any player

 ♣ playing style of certain players

   Take down notes and decide what your sidebar would be at the end of the game. 7-8 paragraphs. Deadline: Thursday, 5pm, Oct. 1. Pls post your story here either by copying the link to your post or embedding the text of your story (you can use a pseudonym if you’re shy)
        Suggested structure: 1st par:  a)a good quote; b)the action of your sidebar story, or what happened; c)a description of the scene. 2nd par: Elaborate on the “who” and the “how”. 3rd par: Provide the “why”, or explanation of what caused incident; 4th par: Explanation of the rules of the game; 5th par: Explanation from both sides; or from those knowledgeable about the game; or from aficionados; etc. 6th par: Historical background; 7th par: Forecast, implications for the next games.

Here are some samples of stylized sidebarring of sports stories:

UAAP on trial – again
By Al Mendoza, for The Standard, Sept. 16, 2013

OBVIOUSLY, a violation has been committed in the University Athletic Association of the Philippines basketball, not only by players but by a coach, as well.

Seemingly, the punishing authority to impose penalties on the cornered culprits had slept on the job.

So, authorities themselves were remiss in rules implementation?

In layman’s language, the rule says team officials and players assessed one-game suspensions with unsportsmanlike fouls committed or other similar offenses.

No problem with that. Officials follow that to the letter.

But there’s a catch, culatilla. The one-game suspension also bars the suspended coach or player to be in the vicinity of the venue on playing day when he is serving the sentence and his team has a game.

A violation of the rule would merit forfeiture of the game for the affected team.

Thus, when Ateneo coach Bo Perasol was serving his one-game suspension just a while back, he was sighted at the venue—and he admitted it—where the Blue Eagles fought the University of the East Red Warriors.

After Ateneo had defeated UE under the tutelage of Ateneo assistant coach Sandy Arespacochaga, UE officials went to the UAAP technical committee to report Perasol’s infraction.

Before the UAAP committee could make a ruling on Perasol’s infraction, it was also reported that UE’s suspended players were also seen on the venue during the Ateneo-UE game.

Either the Committee members were rattled or being diplomatic because, instead of imposing the rule of such violation, i.e. forfeiture of the game for Ateneo, the Eagle victory was upheld and instead, Perasol was given another one-game suspension.

Completely ignored was the rule on forfeiture, ruling instead to suspend Perasol another game.

That isn’t only downright funny, it is also a Solomonic decision in reverse mode.

By not declaring Ateneo at fault, the Committee broke the law, period.

By not also declaring UE at fault with its suspended players also seen at the venue, the Committee broke the law, period.

Simply put, the Committee did not enforce the correct punishment: forfeiture on both schools.

Seemingly again, the Committee has rules that the Committee would wantonly break. Thus, the law enforcer has become the law violator.

This is not only bad for the league but for the fans as well—and, worst, bad for the entire basketball republic, as well.

Are we courting the public ire here?

Has the UAAP committee become callous to criticism? Totally indifferent?

Why UAAP Commissioner Chito Loyzaga has kept mum over all this brouhaha boggles the mind.

Obviously, Loyzaga has merely become a figurehead, is without true grit, forceful powers.

This brings to mind the call of long ago to appoint a permanent UAAP commissioner for him to have a day-to-day guarding of league affairs, including during off-season, as in the PBA where it has a permanent commissioner since its birth in 1975.

The practice of the UAAP to appoint a commissioner every season has become obsolete and defies dynamism in a milieu now fraught with the vagaries of change.

The UAAP commissioner today does not even have enough teeth to decide matters of importance and, during the rare times that he tries to impose his will, he gets overruled often by the Committee.

The UAAP is 76 seasons old but it is odd that it has not adapted to the times, has remained jurassic.

Change is the call of the moment.
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And from the legendary Recah Trinidad (this is being included here for sheer style, wit, intentional punning, maintaining a central metaphor):

UST defies a Commandment to win
By Recah Trinidad for The Inquirer. /04/2006

NO, IT COULD not be openly claimed as a case of the better team winning.

Far from it. The University of Santo Tomas Growling Tigers reclaimed the UAAP basketball crown on Monday because they were the better escape artists.

They won because they dared to defy the odds.

Pushed closest to the cliff, they kept their nerves when everything had looked lost.

They won because they were braver, steadier.

The Ateneo de Manila University Blue Eagles?

They had everything to regret, nothing to be ashamed of.

They had lost to a more blessed team.

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No, for Ateneo, it could not be the case of the favorite dropping what had looked like a won championship game.

Okay, UST had lost its team pillar, the powerful center Jervy Cruz, with a minute and 16 seconds left in regulation.

UST was also being outplayed and outscored in stretches.

However, the Tigers simply snapped back and snatched the title after the Eagles had started to run away with the silverware.

Of course, UST’s steadiness would not be defined by the horrible misses from the foul line at the most crucial period — when half a point could spell victory or defeat.

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Add to that the fact that Ateneo had the sharper heroes, like the duo of JC Intal and Macky Escalona, who carried the scoring load in the killing homestretch.

Everything had appeared to be going wrong for the Tigers

But in an incredible twist, Jojo Duncil, eventual series MVP, took over scoring chores.

Once the Tigers had caught up, the Eagles tried hard as they did but could no longer shake them off.

Ateneo had all the chances in the world to win it but Intal also started firing duds.

Meanwhile, Santo Tomas, hideous with free shots, suddenly found the mark from the foul line.

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It could be said that UST reclaimed the UAAP basketball kingship because it also dared violate one of the Ten Commandments.

It was a big steal for the Growling Tigers, originally known as the Glowing Goldies in the days of Renato Reyes, Danny Florencio and other elder legends of the varsity circuit.

UST grabbed victory from the Ateneo Eagles with one of the finest heists in Philippine basketball lore.

Of course, the Tigers had to ride on greater resourcefulness, stronger nerves, to avoid being caught.

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Anyway, it would indeed be corny to suggest that they should request the Vatican to assign a team to investigate UST’s miracle win.

But then, was this not a case of the Dominicans having a better system of worship than the Jesuits?

There must have been some supernatural intervention out there at the Big Dome Monday evening.

For proof — after the deafening hysterics, the endless jumping, the fearless clawing and shoving — the game was inexplicably decided in the quiet and sanctity of the foul line, when most of the fans were praying, clasping rosaries, their eyes averted from the playing court.

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Another “sidebar”, again,  from the equally legendary Al Mendoza, a tongue-in-cheek conspiracy theory from his “source” “Valentin “VD” Dakuykoy”

Cult of the mercenary
By Al Mendoza for The Standard, July 15, 2013

THERE are six Africans in the ongoing University Athletic Association of the Philippines basketball tournament – a record.

Africans, mostly from Nigeria and Cameroon, have been in the league for quite some time now so that it’s no longer a big deal seeing them strut their wares year in and year out.

It’s become virtually a way of life in the UAAP that people in this cage-crazed country accepting African presence in the league has become as natural as sneezing when you have colds.

So in love even are some of our schools with African cagers that one school in the ongoing UAAP cagefest has enlisted two Africans.

That’s because Africans that are being recruited are generally much taller than our homegrown talents, and are therefore a boon to schools they play for.

Under league rules, though, a school can only use one African – or any foreigner for that matter – one at a time during a game.

That’s because dispatching two towering Africans at the same time would give the school an undue advantage – as if having one African behemoth on the hard court isn’t downright advantageous enough.

OK, I write about African cagers today because of a disturbing report I just received from Valentin “VD” Dakuykoy.

Remember VD, my legman of nearly 40 years?

He said African players have now become vulnerable targets of shady characters possibly linked to a syndicate that has unlimited powers to manipulate results of UAAP games.

“Being all Africans with a commonality as players in the UAAP, they bond together, stick together and think as one together,” VD said to me. “Birds of the same feather flock together, right Sir?”

In other words, these players, because of their crucial roles in their respective schools, can help influence the outcome of every game when they are playing.

For example, two clashing schools having an African each in their lineups can be victims of manipulation by their respective African players.

How?

Because they can make or unmake their schools’ title dreams, both Africans may just agree who between their schools would win in the game at hand.

Thus, if School A is picked to win, all the African player from School B has to do is bungle his game. That simple.

Now why would the Africans do such foolishness and agree to sell their souls?

“For the money, Sir,” VD said. “Not for anything, Sir, not to belittle our African brothers, but by the very nature of their presence here, they can be easily sucked into hanky-panky. They are not rich that is why they grab the chance to play here. I can only pray and hope my sources give me wrong data and ill information on the Africans.”

The first African to make an impact on college basketball was Sam Ekwe, who powered San Beda to sensational victories in the NCAA.

Because of Ekwe’s exploits, scouts and enterprising recruiters scoured Africa’s vast basketball resources and would soon peddle finds from Nigeria and Cameroon to schools willing to spend in the hopes of winning championship trophies.

But if we were to quantify though the real worth of Africans present in both the NCAA and UAAP vis-à-vis our basketball development program, not to mention national interests, it could redound to nothing – virtually.

For one, the Africans steal much of the playing time of our homegrown centers, in the process stunting the growth of would-be slot men for our national teams.

For another, after their stints here, the Africans go home – if not bum around here and, God forbid, deteriorate into virtual dregs of society.

Did UAAP Commissioner Chito Loyzaga not already punish an African named Mamie of University of the East for unsportsmanlike conduct during the UE-Adamson game last week, in which Adamson routed heavily-favored UE in unbelievable fashion?

Good job, Chito, but if at all, with the unabated proliferation of Africans in our basketball leagues, aren’t we now guilty of espousing the cult of the mercenary?

You win with suspected hacks in your payroll – when you are not even 100 percent sure of their loyalty if not honesty – may I now light a candle for the art of sleeping with the enemy.

May it not flicker long.

ALL IN As host of the UAAP Season 76, Adamson had the exclusive right to pick the venue of the games. That explains why the Mall of Asia Arena was chosen over Araneta Coliseum…Only La Salle and Ateneo are the schools that don’t have Africans in their lineups in the ongoing UAAP series.
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16 thoughts on “(Updated) J101. Edits. & today’s on-the-spot writing exercise: Sidebarring a story

  1. Eagles’ biggest claw
    Clearly, the people wouldn’t expect less.

    As Ateneo Blue Eagles’ team captain Kiefer Ravena enters his final season, Coach Bo Perasol said expectations are a lot higher this time for the star.

    The rookie-laden team is also a challenge for ‘The Phenom’, but according to the coach, he believes that Ravena’s leadership can lift up the newbies.

    In the game between the Blue Eagles and the University of the Philippines (UP) Fighting Maroons yesterday, Ravena led his team as he scored double-double of 11 points and 11 rebounds to go with four assists and two steals.

    Add to the fact that Kiefer’s fellow graduating veteran Von Pessumal contributed 10 points for Ateneo’s 56-43 victory over UP.

    The son of former PBA player Bong Ravena, Kiefer also showed his own talent as he bagged several awards in the UAAP including the Season 74 Rookie of the Year. He was also crowned the last season’s Most Valuable Player (MVP).

    Ravena also played for the 2009 Philippines men’s national under-17 basketball squad that was sent to the 2009 FIBA Asia Under-16 Championship wherein they coveted the 4th place. He was also a part of the Sinag Pilipinas team that was sent to the 2013 SEA Games in which they were declared the tournament’s champions.

    With his huge talent that led him to numerous achievements, Kiefer Ravena is truly the biggest claw of today’s Blue Eagles.

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  2. UP loses to Ateneo, is “UAAP’s worst scorer”; 56-43

    “UP is the worst-scoring team in the league,” the announcer for the UP – Ateneo game said, earning a collective gasp from the audience.

    Even though UP has suffered its fourth straight loss after its two-game winning streak, the statement still came as a surprise, especially for UP supporters.

    However, upon closer scrutiny, there is some truth in the announcer’s statement. In its two victories, UP has won by relatively narrow margins; winning by seven points against UE, and five points against DLSU.

    Its losses, however, were far more drastic, with an exception to the game against UST (where UP only lost by two points); losing to FEU by 17 points, to NU by 16 points, and to ADMU by 13 points.

    Jett Manuel, formerly UP’s top scorer, came out scoreless in the game against Ateneo, along with six other teammates, driving the announcer’s point home as of the present standings.

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    UP loses to Ateneo, is “UAAP’s worst scorer”; 56-43

    “UP is the worst-scoring team in the league,” the announcer-analyst for the UP – Ateneo game said, earning a collective gasp from the audience.

    Even though UP has suffered its fourth straight loss after its two-game winning streak, the loaded statement still came as a surprise, especially for UP supporters.

    Though not entirely accurate (if UP is compared to Adamson with no wins so far), there is some truth in the announcer’s statement. In its two victories, UP has won by relatively narrow margins; winning by seven points against UE, and five points against DLSU.

    Its losses, however, were far more drastic, with an exception to the game against UST (where UP only lost by two points); losing to FEU by 17 points, to NU by 16 points, and to ADMU by 13 points.

    Jett Manuel, formerly UP’s top scorer, came out scoreless in the game against Ateneo, along with six other teammates.

    Audiences expect more objective analyses and commentaries, and less of the loaded comments. The online bashing and conflicts among team supporters are enough.

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  4. Manuel, scoreless in the UP-ADMU game

    Jett Manuel, the leading scorer of the UP squad this season, contributed zero points to his fellow Maroons in the recently concluded Battle of Katipunan.

    After 18.5 minutes of playing time, the cager wasn’t able to make his baskets. Manuel had a 0 out of 7 field goal shooting which is his worst field goal percentage in a game so far this season.

    The aggressiveness and confidence that seemed to make his shooting going in the past 5 games weren’t present in this game.

    In the game of basketball, players have their off games. When this happens to a shooter, he/she who usually has hot hands on the hard court suddenly can’t convert his/her shots.

    According to one of the commentators during the game, Rensy Bajar’s, UP head coach, shuffle of his starters might be one of the reasons why Manuel didn’t get his groove in the game.

    Manuel’s 12.4 average in scoring didn’t manifest in this game.

    After 4 straight losses and a poor performance in this last outing, Manuel should bounce back in their next game to be able to have a higher chance of stopping the losing streak.

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  5. UP suffers loss at battle of the Katipunan

        “UP is the worst scoring team…” This is the comment of one of the commentators, presumably Boom Gonzalez, during the game between the University of the Philippines (UP) and Ateneo de Manila University (ADMU) Last Wednesday at the MOA Arena.
    
    And upon closer inspection, this is actually quite true.
    
    The Blue Eagles finished the game against the Fighting Maroons with a score of 69-43, respectively. With a 13-point difference in their scores, the game between the Katipunan-based schools has one of the lowest final scores for this season.
    
    Speaking of differences in points, there’s quite a gap with UP’s scores and their opponents’ during the previous games.
    

    During the UST-UP game, the Growling Tigers ended the fight with 67-59. The NU-UP game finished with 68-52, and FEU concluded their match against UP with 75-58.

    Another thing that could be noticed during the four consecutive losses of the Maroons is their ability to maintain the lead in the points. Among the recent four games, UP’s biggest lead was just 2 points, against UST, and after that the España-based school once again dominated the court with their shots.
    
    And finally, UP received many fouls during the last four games. Due to this, the opponent teams were given free throws, which helped boost their scores even more.
    
    Even though UP’s current standing is 2-4, the UP community still hasn’t lose hope that they could get another victory, and perhaps a bonfire.
    

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  6. UP branded as the ‘worst-scoring team in the league’

    “UP is the worst-scoring team in the league.”, UP has the lowest scoring output.”, said the two commentators of the ABS-CBN Sports+Action Channel 23 live broadcast of the UAAP Season 78 Men’s Basketball game between the UP Fighting Maroons and the Ateneo Blue Eagles yesterday at the SM MOA Arena.

    UP suffered its fourth loss in the season with the final score of 56-43 and an average of 13 point-defeat margin in their last three games. The Fighting Maroons is in need of a hero to take charge and forward the team as their ‘balanced attack’ turned out to be insufficient.

    But the Eagles came prepared, carrying out Coach Perasol’s plan for Ravena and Pessumal to closely watch Jett Manuel, the Maroon’s leading scorer. This resulted to Manuel missing each one of his 7 shots and committing 2 turnovers.
    Having only secured three points on the final quarter of their previous game, Ravena and Pessumal were expected to bounce back ferociously in this game but instead contributed only 11 points each as a consequence of their close hounding of Jett Manuel.

    “We don’t want a scorer to get his groove. Malaking bagay that Jett wasn’t part of their game today.” answered Coach Perasol told ABS-CBN Sports when asked about their actions towards Manuel.
    The 2-0 winning streak of UP at the opening of the season pushed many to believe that they are on their way to a Final Four appearance yet following UP’s continuous defeat after their game with the NU Bulldogs further made the team the talk of town.

    It looks like the Maroon’s dream to be in Final Four is getting hazy. But Tiebreaker Times’ Gil Lopez said that if UP can fix its free throw problems and finds someone to step up in court, the team will have a big chance to overpower the other teams.

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  7. Ravena had his eyes on Manuel

    Kiefer Ravena, having had a double-double of 11 points and 11 rebounds to go with 4 assists and 2 steals, kept his guard on for UP’s Jett Manuel having scored nothing for the whole game.

    Despite being UP Fighting Maroons’s leading scorer for the Men’s Basketball Team the past games this season, Manuel seemed to have spiralled down in his attempts to win the game versus Ateneo Blue Eagle’s last September 30 at the Mall of Asia Arena.

    Ravena, along with Pessumal, made it sure to stay in front of Manuel for the entirety of the time UP’s point guard was on the floor.

    Ateneo basketball team’s head coach Bo Perasol shared that it was all part of their gameplan against the University of the Philippines as he said, “We planned on defending their attackers.” Perasol was particularly worried about Manuel, having a remarkable 12.4 scoring average.

    The plan worked as Manuel, along with 6 other Maroons, was left scoreless in the duration of the game.

    The game ended with a score of 56-43, UP going down once again in the leaderboard with 2-4 and Ateneo up with 4-2.

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  8. UP and the losing streak

    The performance of University of the Philippines Fighting Maroons earlier in the UAAP Season 78 gave hope that the team will break from its reputation for being a losing team. However, their 56- 43 defeat in the claws of the Ateneo de Manila University Blue Eagles yesterday September 30 served as a dampener for this hope and as a marker for the team’s fourth loss in a row.

    How will this streak affect their performance in their upcoming games?

    There is a study by Roger C. Vergin of the University of Pennsylvania published in the Journal of Sport Behavior that looks into the psychology of streaks and momentum in sports. In the study, Vergin reviewed material on the psychology of momentum. He then conducted statistical analyses on the results of a season of major league baseball and two seasons of NBA to determine whether or not there exists a correlation between success in a game and results in recent games over a season.

    Previous studies have claimed that favorable performance in previous games have positive effects on the psyche of players. They boost the confidence of players and serve as encouragement for them to aim higher. In the like manner, unfavorable performance in previous games usually mean failure.

    After studying the trend in the results of the major league baseball and NBA games, however, Vergin concluded otherwise. The belief regarding the losing or winning momentum is unfounded. “When faced with losing streaks, coaches and players should realize that such streaks do occur occasionally quite naturally and are not necessarily due to poor performance resulting from a loss of confidence due to recent losses,” he wrote.

    To support his study, Vergin puts forward an alternative explanation, the fat cat syndrome. A winning team can become overconfident and therefore perform with less vigor. A losing team can increase its chances of success if they choose to become more focused and motivated.

    Applying Vergin’s study to the case of the UP Fighting Maroons, it can be said that what the team is experiencing is a natural trough in performance. Moreover, the team stands the chance of breaking the losing streak and getting themselves back up on the boards.

    The question now is, will they? That is for us to find out this Sunday, October 4, in their game at the SM Mall of Asia Arena, where they will be up against the Adamson University Falcons.

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  9. EDIT

    The last lines in the last paragraph were italicized. Only the word “will” in the first sentence was meant to be italicized.

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  10. Manuel goes for zero

    In a losing effort to the Ateneo Blue Eagles, the UP Fighting Maroons finished with 43 points—none of which came from their star shooter.

    Jett Manuel was held scoreless throughout the game, shooting 0-for-7 and making 3 rebounds with 18.5 minutes on the court.
    Reigning UAAP MVP Kiefer Ravena kept Manuel in check for most part of the game and made sure UP’s leading scorer never got his shooting groove on.

    Before the battle of Katipunan, Manuel had been averaging 12.4 points, 3.4 rebounds, and 1.8 assists in the last five games.

    Jett Manuel and the rest of UP need to regain their rhythm and play like did in their first two games as they head to the final game of the first round against the Adamson Soaring Falcons.

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